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145 - it's all good fun until someone loses a tail - part 2




Somehow this one didn't work out as well as I hoped - the 6th panel is a bit predicatable, and I only added it because if I did 5 panels one of them would have to be really big.
So far I have made 50 pages of my book and I'm expecting to get some printing cost quotes this week. I am pretty excited.
9.1.06 12:28
 


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(9.1.06 12:33)
grossly brilliant. i likes it.


(9.1.06 13:02)
Fabulous strip! And I was happily surprised by the last panel - if a little concerned.


(9.1.06 13:12)
Beaver is always so sensible.


(9.1.06 13:42)
OoooOOOoooh....!


(9.1.06 13:43)
I didn't think it was predictable. A bit vile, but not predictable. Well done.


(9.1.06 14:08)
Very good... I think that last panel would actually be funnier, silent.


(9.1.06 16:52)
Am I being very thick as I find the sixth panel predictable at all?


(9.1.06 17:04)
It's because steve always wants to eat things. Especially if they are alive.


james f (9.1.06 17:08)
hilarious! especially the 'no tail'. i didn't expect steve's wanting to eat it too.


(9.1.06 17:20)
Is it wrong that I want a baby Steve? MRRFFFL.


(9.1.06 17:21)
Chintz, it'd be biologically wrong!


(9.1.06 17:25)
I don't want to give birth to him. Though that'd be fun in a weird way. Hehe! Actually, maybe I'm still feeling a bit ill..


(10.1.06 06:20)
Is there going to be another little Steve growing out of his tail-absence a la Total Recall? (And that's not a badly-disguised talking out of one's bottom joke). And if you use that idea could I have a free badge?
And why, after all this time, do I still want to call Beaver and Steve 'Steve and Badger'? Doesn't look anything like a badger. Though the introduction of one would be cool. Though not from Steve's bottom.


(10.1.06 12:16)
This strip is great! I can't decide which is my favourite bit the 'no tail' or Steve's face as he protests 'but Beaver...!' Love it. yay!


(10.1.06 14:34)
Dont be so hard on yourself, its not predictable! Its funny!
So there.


(11.1.06 22:12)
Just a further thought re: publishers. I've approached The Friday Project. Not sure if your material falls within their remit - but you could always check them out:
http://www.thefridayproject.co.uk/authors/
Good Luck
Al


(12.1.06 11:50)
Thanks Alan - I'll give it a look.


LavenderD (13.1.06 03:48)
I think Steve's tail should grow into the Turnip. Since he did eat two or three.

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